Ok it's time to get out with the old and in with the new. My story is going great but there is one problem..... I HAVE SO MANY MISTAKES AND PARTS LEFT OUT! Ian going to get rid of the story and start fresh, getting a new piece of paper. Consider the old one a " "rough draft." I am going to keep the old story up so I can rewrite what I wrote get ready of the real story. A Second Chance (A human in Equestria). Sorry for having to delay this story but the "rough draft" should get me through it faster than typing from the top
Of my head, anyway thanks for understanding you guys if you want read it somewhere else I'm going to
get an account on fimfiction so you can read it there to. Same title, same username, same story, different web-sight. Thanks you guys are Awesome!
( p.s the thing that went wrong was that it was in freaking first person! It took my 7 chapters to figure this out. Wow just wow Tristan you are a horrible author. ugh Brian is probably mad. Sry Brian! I have to rewrite this book
Brian
"What?! Come on man you've got to be kidding me! I have to do it all over again? And my first adventure was coming up, dang. OPPs sorry Tristan! Um spoiler alert!
Tristan(me)
It's okay Brian, anyway it's time I get a second chance to rewrite this story. If it's good or bad tell me, I Will NOT get insulted by comments, they give me feedback on if I'm doing good or bad. And if you have a suggestion then put it in the comments, please I need them. I plan to have this story up in 2 weeks (sorry if longer, school, work, parents) but that's my estimated time for me to get 4 or more chapters. Thanks for reading my update and read on!
