taamarriix3

Ohmygod!!! Thank you so much for the compliments on my advice. It takes a real author to be able to accept criticism! So once again, Thanks SOO SO much, I appreciate it so much...
          	
          	As soon as I get a moment, I will read all your stories, comment, fan, the whole shabang.
          	
          	Since I've been talking about what writers should do, I found it kind of hypocritical that I have no stories. I was wondering if you guys would like me to write a story. I really want to make it different. I don’t have a formal intro thing, but here’s the (very) basic idea. 
          	
          	Seth is your typical 17 year old guy. He loves sports, hot girls, video games, did I say hot girls? Then Stella comes into his life, and she is very different than your typical girl. Despite her girly name, she is anything but. How will Seth react to this new person in his life? How will their eventual friendship change his life forever? You will see…
          	
          	On a somewhat random side note, I have this idea, that I kind of took from the show NCIS (love that show). For each chapter, I’m going to have a photo (that I took) that will somehow integrate into the story. 
          	
          	Tell me what you guys think!!!
          	-Tamar

AngelicSpring

Hi, hi, hi!
          Would you read my completed short story, Getting Back a Life? You were amazingly opinionated with your advices for better writing and I would hugely appreciate comments and criticisms from you. I would like to know my weaknesses from other people. Thank you like a million times!
          MUCH LOVE, PEACE OUT!

socloseyetsofaraway

Hey(:
          I saw on the last page of your advice to how to improve your story, ect, you said that if someone wanted to ask you to read there story then ask you.
          
          ;D Soo...yeah that's what I was wondering. (: Please be honest! I want to know if my story is any good. Thank you

Susan_Bischoff

I really enjoyed your Advice piece and, having been poking around here a few days, I already see what you're talking about. I would love opinions of an avid reader on my story. The title is Hush Money. It's fully completed and in the editing process. The first two scenes are up, and hopefully free of gross grammatical errors and the like. I you have the time, I'd really appreciate your thoughts.
          
          Hush Money
          Be normal, invisible. Don’t get close to anyone. Kids with psychic abilities tend to mysteriously disappear when they get noticed. Joss has spent years trying to hide. Now she has an unasked-for best friend, who is the victim of an extortion plot by the school bully, who used to like Joss, who is best friends with her long-time crush, who is actually talking to her. Life just got more complicated.

TaintedBloodBooks

Hey there, 
          
          I just read your advice on writing, and couldn't agree more. I'd love to know what you think of my stories. :)
          
          ~ 
          
          HAVE YOU EVER WONDERED WHAT WOULD HAPPEN IF ALIENS CAME TO EARTH? Well, wonder no longer fellow Wattpader, because that day has come... 
          
          Welcome to the Universe. 
          A Watty Awards comedy... 
          
          ^ My story follows a troubled teen named Fly, who isn't anything close to normal, but wants nothing more then to fit in... Those days are over when she meets a hot male named Zharov, and her life changes forever, as the future unfolds... Apparently all is not what it seems in this small town, were everybody knows each other's dirty little secrets, but what is he hiding? ;-) 
          
          It's a bird, it's a plane, no... It's a SPACESHIP... What the? o.o 
          
          
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          Like vampire stories? Well, sink your teeth into this! 
          
          'The Not So Secret Life of Helena Callahan' 
          
          ^ My story follows a teenage runaway, who sells her body to make a living. And her not so average life is about to get even more bizarre when she meets a guy who gives her a little more then she bargained for. ;-) 
          
          -- Emma.