kiriahkache

Hi!!!
          
          I was wondering if you could read the first 12 chapter of my book and let me know what you think!! I’m a new writer (kinda) and I would love some feedback. So please read, comment, and vote!! It’ll be greatly appreciated!!! 
          
          Thanks in advance! 
          
          
          https://my.w.tt/9gn2kWPlFO

tabreonna

The story was great, I didnt see any mistakes it seem like it was throughly thought about before published there are some points where it seem everything was moving fast but I was able to understand how the story was written. For your second book its good I like how you made it based on true events and how you actually felt and handled the situation
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vampgirl2931

Hi gurl.. Thank you so much for the follow hope you try reading my creation..

tabreonna

@vampgirl2931 your very welcome☺
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vampgirl2931

@tabreonna Thank you so much... the words you just type made my heart melt..I really appreciate it a lot... thx for your support, love.
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tabreonna

@vampgirl2931 yes im addicted☺
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