Hello! Good evening/day. I'm a newbie writer promoting my story 'Seeking Hearts'. I badly need critiques and I hope you would check it out. If you have some free time. Thank you so much and Godbless!
"You know sometimes there are things that we are really unsure of. Natatakot ako Bliss. Takot akong mali ako at tama ang mga sinasabi ng boses sa utak ko."
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