Marci : Hey, I love the way your book is coming along, but don't forget to make the corrections (≧∇≦)/
Pearl : And if you want to display and action, you could use this eg : * signs *
Marci : The inverted commas ( " ) are use only in speech, or someone is talking eg : " she's gone ?! "
..and don't forget the ( , ) regular commas, to pulse in each sentence,
eg : he pushed her over the cliff, utterly not aware that it was their
Pearl : do hope you, make an effort and correct it, and don't stop writing !, am loving it already !“ψ(｀∇´)ψ, and I hope they will be some dirty sex scene
* nose bleed *
Marci : anyway...please continue and I'll try to get more followers to read your work, I want more yaoi from you sista !
Pearl & Marci : Hulk out (≧∇≦)/（⌒▽⌒）
