takashijioni1
I'm writing a new gaara x reader LEMON. Coming out soon. It will be much better than the last one I wrote since I personally have more experience than I did before when I first wrote it.
takashijioni1
takashijioni1
it's my second story please give me your opinion https://www.wattpad.com/story/115669296
Rylee_NotMyName
@takashijioni1 It's really good but... I couldn't help but to notice some errors 1. If you're writing Fanfic you have to write it in 3rd not 1st person 2. Kankuro's name is spelled wrong 3. Some things aren't capped 4. Somethings should be lowercased