@talihashi
I've been wanting to put out a new chapter recently, and decided to read over my work from the beginning before I started on the next chapter. I found myself getting caught up in editing some of the scenes in the first chapter, and rewrote a lot of it up until the end of the bar fight scene. I hope this fixed some of the larger issues that a few of you (my readers) have pointed out to me. If any of you give it a reread I hope you'll let me know what you think of the improvements!
Alright guys, I'm sorry I haven't been putting anything out this month. Practically all of my attention and time has been captured by a project I've been working on. Nearly every hour of these last few weeks has been consumed by this project. I'm going to continue working on my story, but I won't be able to do it justice just now. Thanks for your understanding and patience.
Alright, I'd just like to update all of my readers. I'm still in the middle of a move, and have a lot going on. But I have been working on the next chapter. I'm really excited to finish it and see what you all think. I just don't know when I'll have the time to finish it. Hopefully soon. Thank you all for your patience!
Alright everyone, I really appreciate the time you've spent reading my story The Enraldi and letting me know your thoughts. I'm writing this to let you all know I'm going to be moving in about a week and have been pretty busy. I'll continue working on my story, but until I'm moved and settled I'm going to be adding a new chapter every other week. It shouldn't be to long before I'm back to one a week again. Thank you for your patience!
@Han_Solo05 there aren't many actual writers on here (that I've found yet) that have impressed me. I'm extremely picky, so I definitely think you're worth a follow.
Oh, my gosh. Thank you so much for following me. :)
I'm working hard on the next chapter, and I'm doing my best to be more descriptive and detailed. I think I'll have it ready to post tomorrow. I hope that it doesn't come out as overly detailed when you all have a chance to read it. Anyways, thank you for following and all of the advice so many of you have given me. It has helped me and my writing improve immensely. I look forward to hearing the thoughts of everyone when I post this new chapter.
There's a lot of dialogue in this newest chapter. I hope I wrote it well. Can't wait to hear what you guys think!
The summary is short and straight to the point, which I love. One thing I could suggest is maybe cut it a paragraph. When your start talking about Rennar, it could be another paragraph. (I hope I spelled his name right.)
Okay...I'm excited about this. I love fantasy fiction!
