FinahJane👅💦

Since I was dumb enough to delete all my books cause I felt like they were bad, maybe it's a good idea if I put out a small preview of a book I'm currently working on...
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          ”Can I go with you?”
          
          I never cried before and my sister knew this, but watching her pack her clothes and get ready to leave made me so upset. It was approximately 4:13 and she had just woken me up from my sleep. I was confused because I didn't think about the reason why she’d wake me up at this time. She didn't tell me anything. Her words we're very plain and simple. 
          
          “I have to leave.. But I will be back for you. Just give me time” She smiled slightly while pushing my hair out of my face and wiping my eyes. I didn't know what was happening. I didn't understand what she had to leave for. That was perhaps the saddest part of her disappearance. 
          
          
          Don't know if I should post it yet..

I know you probably dont have time or dont think you should but could you please check out the first part of my story and tell me what I could do to improve it I would be very grateful. Anyway thanks.

hi! thanks for voting on my book!❤

I almost screamed when I saw you followed me. You are one of my favorite writers on here

Thanks for the votes. :)