Hey! I live in NY too in BK. I was wondering if you could check out my book and critique it give some thoughts on that would really help. thank you for reading this :)
@Starelephant youre so welcomed :) and NY is kinda amazing...mostly in Manhattan bc thats where all the fashion, food, bookstores, mueseums, art, candy stores, and skyscrapers...basically larger buildings of every store u can name