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How are you gonna shit on someone else for being an amateur writer when you're one yourself, I read a few chapters of your books and you're not all that good either. It's called fucking practice, nobody is gonna be an amazing writer right of the bat, it takes time, learn and improve from your mistakes, that's how you become a good writer. Right now it just seems like you're projecting because you're jealous of Tanjirow, are you upset that her ONE book blew up and none of your's didn't? If you ever want a platform of any kind you need to learn basic respect because right now, you're not gonna get anywhere.