@TheInsideOfARose (Want shorter version?Read the last sentence, it's the summary of what I have said.) Well "super good" is not the word that you should be using for. She's lacking with originality names but I guessed she already knows that. It's true how amazing she makes up story but failed to choose the right title for it. How can I say this in a polite way? There is no connection between her story and her title. In a book or a story, the title is the first thing that we always see. It summarize everything with only 1 or 5 words. Lecturer judge by the title, story summary and other people's opinion before reading it. I was intrigue by the title and your comment that made me check it. I was disappointed as a lecturer when her title and her story are completely different thing. In short, The content is archetypal work but her skills on giving names are rudimentary.
