tarotitaro
Could you all do me a favor and comment on paragraphs or lines in my story you think need more work or that you liked, as you're reading along? That would be so helpful. I'm not used to writing in the third perspective so any commentary surrounding that would be great too! It’s been tricky finding the time to focus on writing new chapters and I'm going on a trip this week but I WILL update soon! :)
paida_popoko95
@tarotitaro Sure we can do that. Enjoy your trip! :) All good, looking forward to the chapter once ready.
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