Tali

Hey Tali. For your story. "The Room" 
          To let you know your grammer needs to imporove a small bit. The story is great. You could expand your chapters so your readers get more. See me for a more depth conversation. Story is pretty good. Better then I thought you'd do. 

Thanks a lot for following me. Hope you read my stories and I would love to read your stories too. Specially that one, Forest of magic. It looks interesting. And maybe we can be friends. Pm whenever you want too. I'll be happy to make a new friend :)

i hope you enjoy my stories https://www.wattpad.com/story/119496368

Thanks you for adding my story Four + One to your reading list! 

Thank you it will take a while though 

Hope you post ya first story soon dude!! 

Hey. Hope ya makes heaps of amazing stories