Dixithsurana

Hey I have just started writing short stories. Please do check them out and if you wanna suggest something. I would love to read reviews. 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/294525140?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Dixithsurana&wp_originator=CkNbBPPcTtX1j3TLpOswXmnFOcWTtdHg9wXniHGtYWQ4Slhbcf4PKlYnmV7cZe4F7i0YiaSl5swJLLrvTkw%2Fe5WlOpXU2T9G6uQ8%2BwqLupq%2BylqPLk4uVd5vXNBATLu0

EmmaLousiana

Sorry for the inconvenience author! I'm a new writer and I'm currently writing my first story "AMELIA".
          Please read it once and share your ideas on the comments. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/292286920?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=EmmaLousiana&wp_originator=QXhZ6N5Y9onagMAIrSgsLjF3n%2FsaQtPRcKFunHBL61BVy50bBfCK7lKUpOUEgRZOhu0gBiocCoS5oLWLUfwYFoKbkWNDf3yfhsdUohsbK1oQw3ebSwM4Xp1MwwpFyxco