taybearxoxo

It's been freaking forever since I updated! So to make up for it I'll be updating my Creepypasta story more frequently, and I'm still waiting for some request for my Hobbit one shots. And I'll be trying to update my Hobbit story, but I don't have the second movie so it may take awhile. Whelp that's it, I hope everyone has an amazing day! Bye bye!

drakesniper294

Hey umm I need inspiration for my new book Chernobyl cannibles could you like look at it and tell me what think about it and tell me what I need to fix please and thank you 

taybearxoxo

So far it seems really good! I even added it to my library. And seeing as it was a short chapter I can see why it seemed kind of rushed but it was still good. You had little to no grammar mistakes, which to me is a big thing so congrats! And you missed a period here or there but it was still very good. 
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taybearxoxo

It's been freaking forever since I updated! So to make up for it I'll be updating my Creepypasta story more frequently, and I'm still waiting for some request for my Hobbit one shots. And I'll be trying to update my Hobbit story, but I don't have the second movie so it may take awhile. Whelp that's it, I hope everyone has an amazing day! Bye bye!