
drakesniper294
Hey umm I need inspiration for my new book Chernobyl cannibles could you like look at it and tell me what think about it and tell me what I need to fix please and thank you

taybearxoxo
So far it seems really good! I even added it to my library. And seeing as it was a short chapter I can see why it seemed kind of rushed but it was still good. You had little to no grammar mistakes, which to me is a big thing so congrats! And you missed a period here or there but it was still very good.
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