Taylor

I love your book glitches, waiting for updates

Hello! I’m new to Wattpad and was wondering if you could come check out my new book Escaping Darkness. Ill read and comment on any of your works if you would like me too!
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/36163818-escaping-darkness

thanks @trixty - appreciate the helping hand.  It is a bit daunting!  
          Take care.
          t

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And I broke down and decided to start uploading Glitches as well.  A story of a guy who discovers he can stop time in a glitch, and then start it again.  He also is running for his life after the secret societies governing the world of glitches are now after him.  But more importantly is that red headed beauty... finding her again is the only thing running through Ben's mind.  It is the most important thing he can think of.  Even more importantly than surviving...

So I have started uploading my Paladin's Pendant book in draft form.  A great adventure story about a country of animals locked in war and the rule of two terrible Kings.  The book is filled with puzzles, riddles and switchbacks.  I wrote the book after reading Redwall to my son and finding it good, but not quite clever enough.  Would love to hear your thoughts or ideas on how to make the book better.  Tons of work to do still on the story - but your ideas would be greatly appreciated!