LizzieBliss

I was just wondering if you had a moment or two to check out my story, Forever Knight?
          
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          Mae was talented, the way she put her emotions into her music astonished people. But once she loses her family Mae vows never to play again. Until a stranger shows up at the orphanage and takes her in. Little does Mae know though is this Mystery man has his secrets, and dark ones they are.
          
          Mae realizes this man she thought to be kind and caring ends up being a monster that holds her against her will forcing her to face her past and rekindle the great flames of passion for music. Mae however starts to notice passion is arising in other places too.
          
          Can a woman truly tame a monster?
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/369891-forever-knight
          
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          If you like it please vote comment and fan! 
          Thanks, LizzieBliss 
          xoxo 

CreatingBalance_

hello, my name is brie and it's lovely to meet you. (: 
          i was just wondering if you could perhaps take a look at one of my stories? 
          i would greatly appreciate any feedback and would happily return the favour. 
          
          i was also wondering which one you think i should continue? i have four stories and it's getting a bit much continuing them all, you know? so if you have a particular favorite, it would be brilliant if you could help me out. :D 
          
          ▪ Carpe Diem 
          Ambrose is a Goddess, and Zeus' daughter. To help with her Goddess training, she had chosen to live among her people for a couple of weeks, or months at the most, but being a normal teenager is harder than she thought it would be; trouble is brewing beneath the Earth crust and Ambrose is in the middle of a war and remains to be the easy target. 
          
          ▪ The Revolution 
          Vampires are just a myth - right? Wrong. Ever since Edens sister has gone missing, her life has turned upside down, but will she survive when a legion of vampires threaten to destrong the human race? 
          
          ▪ Change of Fate 
          Maya and Eva are normal teeangers, or so they thought - they are half angel. A prophet has told that all three worlds - the realm of the living, hell and heaven - will be destroyed because of the neverending war between heaven and hell, but he has also predicted it is maya and eva that are the key to survival, but will they beat hells army? (made it to #11 on whats hot list) 
          
          ▪ Bitter Salvation 
          James, Emmeline, Sienna, Harry and Noelle are brothers and sisters with a dark secret; they are vampires, of sorts. In need to survive, they must drain humans of their life force, but these teeenagers respect life - they do not want to be monsters. They leave their home in order of a better life, but when their evil mother comes to drag them back, will everyone be safe?