taywoodward555

Hey y'all, so I've been working on a writing project lately and I just feel like I'm missing something. Description? Depth? Plot? I have no idea. Ill be publishing the Prologue and Chapter 1 so if you guys could leave some comments about what you think is and isn't missing that would be a great help on working towards the final drafting of the chapters.
          	
          	It'll be for Revenant, its a story I actually took over for my sister WeDrinkPoison. You should check her out!
          	
          	Love y'all!

taywoodward555

Hey y'all, so I've been working on a writing project lately and I just feel like I'm missing something. Description? Depth? Plot? I have no idea. Ill be publishing the Prologue and Chapter 1 so if you guys could leave some comments about what you think is and isn't missing that would be a great help on working towards the final drafting of the chapters.
          
          It'll be for Revenant, its a story I actually took over for my sister WeDrinkPoison. You should check her out!
          
          Love y'all!

pinkyrosejem

hi!

taywoodward555

Oh good! Glad to hear, it's the taste that counts, and thanks!
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pinkyrosejem

@taywoodward555 my mousse came out so ugly, but it was good, so still a win!
            
            Ohhh, good luck with that!
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taywoodward555

@pinkyrosejem Chocolate mousse is so much fun, especially if you put it in decorative displays, (odd, I know, because it's just going to be eaten anyways). 
            
            I'm prepping for my college classes, we'll see how much that helps...
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