tazkor

@Neversummersdivide Sure I'll go check it out and let you know what I think about it. It might just be a little bit before I get around to it but I will go and read it.

Aetila

Hey there! 
          If you've got some extra, bored, time; I was wondering if you could read one of my stori es and comment on it! (voting , fanning, and whatever are all optional, its the reviews I need!) I'd love to return the favor, and I will! 
          I know this might annoy you, but anything is greatly appreciated! Thanks for reading this! 
          -Celeste 
          My Stories--Golden Dawn; Karis Gebelin was just your typical Hawaii transplant to Manhattan, obsessive top student who actually procrastinates everything, and bound of Ivy; future careerist and current fortune teller. Until-- that is--she finds out everything she aced is more or less a ben trevato-- so good bye model student and striving socialite--and hello demons layer/alchemist and automatic industry tycoon--that is, if she survives. 
          
          Pride, Prestige, and The Undead-- When Aislinn LeBlanc went to boarding school, she expected to be working hard and standing out with her scholastic honors and economist talents in a sea of high-society spoiled brats in their opulent playground. Little did the senator's daughter know, however, that she was entering a world where your rich and famous can kill, slaughter, and hack things like no one's business. As it turn's out she's the useless kid that fades into the background in a truly elite establishment. Olympic fencers, kung-fu masters, fashion-hating, stockbroking supermodels, and the secrets of high society, and African mythology all come together in this tale of zombieslaying and prestige. 
          
          P.S. I know you get a lot of these, but I'll say it; I really don't think my main characters are Mary Sues & Gary Stus, they aren't gorgeous, extremely talented, maybe have one talent, but that's it. My stories also are not centered around one cliche relationship between two gorgeous people or whatever, and I really hope you can try comment! 
          Thank you for the time!

Neversummersdivide

Hello! If it's not too much trouble and you get a chance, could you check out my story Cracks in the Wall? Even if you don't get through all five chapters, I would really appreciate a comment telling me how I should improve or what you liked about it. Thank you so much!