I'll continue to read but I wanna right something down first before I forgot it. I'm currently on the second chapter. You seem to have a good start going but if I could recommend a few things that could make it better. You could have Marshall find out about her being a good girl through her actions instead of mirroucly guessing it at the beginning of the story. And it seems to be going a bit fast. Like he literally just met her and not 10 minutes later he's wondering if he likes her. Other then that it seems be a good start those are just my pieces of advice for now.