tcatlover

I'm very glad that my book has reached 100 reads! Thanks to all of those who read my story. 

Izzybella342

I'll continue to read but I wanna right something down first before I forgot it. I'm currently on the second chapter. You seem to have a good start going but if I could recommend a few things that could make it better. You could have Marshall find out about her being a good girl through her actions instead of mirroucly guessing it at the beginning of the story. And it seems to be going a bit fast. Like he literally just met her and not 10 minutes later he's wondering if he likes her. Other then that it seems be a good start those are just my pieces of advice for now. 

Izzybella342

@BriSavage no problem and your just starting out I had a few issues moving to quickly when I first started writing. You'll get the hang of it I'm sure 
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tcatlover

@BriSavage thanks! Those are very helpful tips! I will do my best to improve. I'll try slowing it down a bit.
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