Hi I'm Emily and I was wondering if you wanted some tips. Firstly if you put a cast together, if a fan of a celebrity searches that celeb then you will get more readers! Also I think instead of the diary you should do POVs and then end it so we know when it is a change of person. Lastly I think you have a great idea and I hope you keep on writing but you don't need to worry so much or keep reminding people it is your first book! I hope you don't hate me or anything and you can read my book and write a tip too! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
