Hey Teah, I think your book was amazing, I absolutely loved the last few lines, I had chills running down my spine. I got a bit lost as to why she went into the house, where was the house situated, like in the forest or just a random house on her street? Also where did the creepy man come from, the one that killed her and why did he do it?? Its your story but can I make a suggestion? instead of her having been shot by a man, maybe have that she dies from the fall because she lands wrong or its too high, as she falls she sees a person staring down at her from the room she just left from, which is the next victim of the room/the audience/viewer, idk sorry if you don't like it, great story!! cant wait too read more! :D
