teasplit

Hi! I haven’t been able to update any of my stories recently. I’m in the long process of editing and writing sheet music for a horror musical that I wrote! So I won’t be able to update for a while!

teasplit

So I read it and I really liked the story. There was a nice plot twist at the end. The letters were a cool way to forward the plot but the only thing that I didn’t like as much was the pacing. I felt like it all happened too fast. One chapter it seems Lucy is fine and the next not so much. I feel like you could have shown that transition more. But I really like the storyline and everything.