tebearlegend

I just realized something..
          	I've had this account for more than two years. (I have no clue when it actually started being the second year)
          	Thank you all for reading my writing, I'm sorry that I haven't updated recently and I'll work on that. 
          	
          	Talk to y'all later~ tebearlegend

tebearlegend

I just realized something..
          I've had this account for more than two years. (I have no clue when it actually started being the second year)
          Thank you all for reading my writing, I'm sorry that I haven't updated recently and I'll work on that. 
          
          Talk to y'all later~ tebearlegend

peachieprince

Hey, you should add punctuation to your writing! Yes, I know it's a hassle, but it adds voice. Take a look at this next sentence:
          
          "Well alright then" she said cheerily.
          
          Or
          
          "Well, alright then!" She said cheerily. 
          
          It gives it more of a voice, and the reader knows how to read the sentence. 

tebearlegend

Alright! Thanks for the suggestion:) 
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