tebohomah99

Please check out my story and give me feedback about if I should continue writing it. Also share it if you like it
          	I just published "Chapter 4." of my story "Dakota Smith ". https://my.w.tt/89DbH04Jq4

AmeeraBamisedun

Hello, 
          I just need to say that your writing skills/style needs significant improvement. There are no spreads marks when needed, there are too many pictures for it to be considered a book. Obviously you may want it that way but these are just some tips for the next time you try to write a book. I tried to read one of your books and I thought the idea/plot was amazing, however the execution of it was excruciating, which caused me significant and constant headaches. Once again from one black woman to another ( I suppose) I do want the best for your books in the future and hopefully I will finally be able to read one of your books and enjoy it.  
          
          PS: this is just some constructive criticism no harm implied. 
          

Tridumb

Hello! Would you like to enter your book on the wildwood awards? 3 more spots left for Chicklit! ❤

Tridumb

@tebohomah99 That's totally fine! You can fill up a form in the CONTESTANTS' FORM chapter :)
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tebohomah99

Hey @Tridumb thank you for considering my book and yes I would like that very much 
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