I know my story is horrible— it was my first story. Just gonna say, I don't really appreciate the fact that you're judging it. I'm not even that old however, which really explains the fact. I'm not the best writer ever, but you don't need to go and crush my dreams by judging my story. You might just be trying to be funny in my book, but by your comments it doesn't exactly seem so. Now if you want to continue reading the story, go ahead, if you're going to keep judging it, there's a little ‘x’ button for a reason. And there's going to be a revised version soon, which will be better than the current one; so read that if you want. I don't mean to come off rude, I just want to set a few things straight. Thank you for your cooperation.