When he has to do it again how about he puts her in the corner with her panties around her ankles and holding her dress up so her red behind is on display. That will amp up the scene.
@teenagelittle everything you have now is great how it is and when it comes to updating you should update once or twice every week depending on your schedule
Your definitely not rushing
@babiimelanin Thank you so much! Okay first I just want you opinion on what I have so far! I feel like I rushed things a little and maybe should go back and rework a little bit?