I like how you write. There's a whole lot of people in wattpad that write amazing stories , and the storyline's great and the characters are perfect and all , but that's just cause it's their writing style . Your stories don't have to be like theirs , it can be as imperfect as it can be , it's fine . Who's to judge ? Let them say what they want , you can't please everyone, do what you want , write whatever you want on that piece of paper, it's your story ,not theirs. Beautiful things don't seem beautiful without the less beautiful ones , just like how stars can't shine without the dark. It's really okay if your writing style isn't as good as theirs , cause I think you can do so much better than that . No one starts out as good as they are now , so I don't think you should be so depressed about it . Good luck !!