anseldeangelo
Hey! I'm new on here, and I'm looking for some new readers for my book, "Unconventional"! I'd really appreciate your thoughts and comments on it!!
LILANGRY
It's funny I haven't written my first book yet and giving advice on how authors can better their work or make their work the best in the entire game
teensus
THANK YOU SOOO MUCH. your advice really helps and i would want to improve my story in any way possible. thank you for reading and commenting :)
LILANGRY
Your story "My Velvet Rope", is amazing, just start adding a cliffhanger after every 3rd chapter you write, and make it suspenseful....make everyone hunger for more, oh and add some drama, a little fighting, and some danger to it, but don't let anyone get killed, plus make it more erotic between the main character (Miguel) and another character who you really want to be with Miguel other than Jaden, (The new boy Miguel bumped into), later on as the story progresses.