tekitten66

My Official first chapter of X-Men Steel and Porcelain is out and I would love to hear everyone’s opinions on this chapter. Please comment what you think because it helps me improve my writing.

A short section of the opening scene for the official first chapter of my latest X-Men fanfic
          
          Everything about this city is so strange, and it's only gotten worse since the streets became my home. The boy thought to himself.
          
          He remembered having that exact thought go through his mind and shortly after becoming officially homeless. He couldn't understand why this city was so full of villainy and hatred, or why someone like him had to face prejudice just for how he was born.
          
          Lately, his situation only helped to feed the dark section of his own mind—a state he called the Void. He had dealt with it since childhood. Back then, his parents dismissed his extreme mood swings as "acting out" or just "being spoiled." But it was different in a way he still couldn't describe. He couldn't explain it, nor could he control it.

If anybody has any universes that Y/N in my Son of Circe book can travel to after the KPDH verse then I’d love to hear them cause I have a few but I’d much prefer to hear the ideas of anybody who reads this crap lol, also I apologise for such a long absence as I have a lot of issues and am just dealing with them slowly and have been working on the latest chapter of Son of Circe for a while and am hoping to finish it relatively soon, so any different universe travel ideas will be appreciated and after the KPDH I will take a break from Son of Circe and work on Creature Commandos X Sentry aka Bob.

I’ve decided to finish the K-POP Demon Hunters chapters for my Son of Circe book and maybe another one before I take a break from it and  focus on a Sentry X Creature Commandos story. I’m not sure how long I may take with my current chapter as I’m suffering from writers block but I promise to finish it soon and start writing in the Sentry book.

@CallanAdamDobbieFras I like that a lot cause it’s just like how Bob and Yelana were in Thunderbolts

@tekitten66 I'd like to see the bride acting like a mom to Bob 

@tekitten66 bob and also In the story I want him and weasel to be best friends since weasels basically just a playful puppy

@tekitten66 yeah

@tekitten66 well from what I can remember Bob was quite nervous shy and he was willing to make a distraction for his friends when he knew that they we're going to get caught and he can be easily manipulated and that's all I can remember if you want to learn more look him up on YouTube cause that will help

@CallanAdamDobbieFras I love bob, bob is the best and I’d totally be cool with making the character like him, do you mind telling me bob’s main character traits so when I can write it I’ll have a better idea on how to portray his character correctly.