telliy

HAppy new year too all of my followers and readers

itssriri

Can you rewrite voice less , not useless?

telliy

@itssriri thank you for sharing your thoughts and I understand that 200 chapter book is a really heavy read and i know that I may haven't always followed straight line, and I did write it over 2 years so mistake was made, and English is my second language, so spelling errors will always be there, I try to correct it when people point it out to me, but as of now im not planning on revisiting it to rewrite it, maybe in a few years. 
            
            And you are presenting you trouble in a respectful way and for that I thank you.
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itssriri

I just want to start by saying I genuinely love the characters , they’re really well done and kept me invested. I believe the primary issue for me was that the storyline felt somewhat overwhelming at times. Perhaps if it had been a bit simpler and more streamlined, the connections between the various elements would have been clearer.
            I completely respect that it’s your work and your vision, I’m not trying to sound rude or negative. I also noticed a few minor mistakes here and there, but overall I really do love the story, it just feels like it has the potential to be even stronger with a bit more clarity. Simplifying things and tightening the writing would make it even easier to read. Overall though, I really did enjoy it. Just sharing my perspective as a reader
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telliy

@itssriri may I ask why?
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telliy

To my dear readers, 
          I'm on a vacation for the next 3 weeks, so this Sunday a chapter  will  come up on my story. "From bloody rags to Buttercream stained aprons"
          My access and time to dedicate to write this story will be limited. I hope you my dear readers will be understanding and have patience to wait for the next chapter.
          
          With love from
          Telliy

telliy

My dear readers of " from bloody rags to Buttercream stained aprons" I have stumbled upon a little writing block, so this Sunday I'm sorry will be no Chapter updates, I'm truly sorry, I'm writing the next chapter but it's flow slowly from my brain. I hope you all will understand. With love from Telliy

telliy

I hope that all of you are enjoying the festivity this year, and I want to wish all of you a merry Christmas.
          I made a slight change in the schedula for ' From Bloody rags to Buttercream stained Aprons' 
          so For all of you who celebrating Christmas tomorrow you will get a small gift in a extra chapter this week, meaning this week will have 1 Chapter tomorrow and 1 on Sunday as normal, I hope that you enjoy the extra chapter to read.

telliy

@ArtemisSnow93 Thank you so much
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ArtemisSnow93

@telliy your books are great like always
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telliy

Hi I just want to give a update on the schedule for
          'From Bloody rags to Buttercream stained Apron' 
          
          The book will still be posted on Sunday but since Sweden has daylight saving, I have to correct the time, it's still 06:00 PM GMT +1 Now. 
          it was GMT +2 before. just so you know the time.
           just for a info to my reader's who want to know when next chapter is coming.