temporary-g-o-l-d

@Anyz84 definitely not a problem!! It is your story and you really can do whatever you'd like with it <3 btw, if you don't mind me asking, how the heck can I have my story get more known? Like more readers without bugging people bc I'd rather not annoy people on this site ? Xx

blissfullytortured

@temporary-g-o-l-d I actually blackmail my followers, hon hahaha Not really! I just try to talk to everyone as much as humanly possible. :) Hope you're well. xx
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yeah i took four years of spanish and it's honestly been a nightmare (no offense) its such a difficult language with grammar with imperfect and present perfect LIKADFADS FASDL ????? 
          	  
          	  nyah alright, thank you so much for all your help, seeing that you're only about 5 chapters into your story and you've already gotten so many votes is something that i really would want to achieve as well hahaha @Anyz84
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blissfullytortured

@temporary-g-o-l-d Of course! in Spanish we have different ways of organizing texts/paragraphs (don't talk about grammar bc it's even worse!) so it is tricky when English is your second language! so every comment that helps me improve is well received in my case! :D
          	  
          	  and yeah, talk to your followers even tho you don't follow them, read their stories, vote them and ask them to read/vote/list yours... go in the fanfic club and join threads, talk about random things. everything helps! :) x
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temporary-g-o-l-d

@Anyz84 definitely not a problem!! It is your story and you really can do whatever you'd like with it <3 btw, if you don't mind me asking, how the heck can I have my story get more known? Like more readers without bugging people bc I'd rather not annoy people on this site ? Xx

blissfullytortured

@temporary-g-o-l-d I actually blackmail my followers, hon hahaha Not really! I just try to talk to everyone as much as humanly possible. :) Hope you're well. xx
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temporary-g-o-l-d

yeah i took four years of spanish and it's honestly been a nightmare (no offense) its such a difficult language with grammar with imperfect and present perfect LIKADFADS FASDL ????? 
            
            nyah alright, thank you so much for all your help, seeing that you're only about 5 chapters into your story and you've already gotten so many votes is something that i really would want to achieve as well hahaha @Anyz84
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blissfullytortured

@temporary-g-o-l-d Of course! in Spanish we have different ways of organizing texts/paragraphs (don't talk about grammar bc it's even worse!) so it is tricky when English is your second language! so every comment that helps me improve is well received in my case! :D
            
            and yeah, talk to your followers even tho you don't follow them, read their stories, vote them and ask them to read/vote/list yours... go in the fanfic club and join threads, talk about random things. everything helps! :) x
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blissfullytortured

Hey babe - just wanted to let you know that I did take into account what you said about breaking the paragraphs and I've just finished editing. I corrected a few mistakes (double spacing, repetition) but the story remains the same. :)
          
          I'll update next when I get 40 votes and 50 comments in the story so you might have to wait a bit longer for that dedication ha.
          
          Hope you've had a wonderful day.
          
          x

blissfullytortured

Thank you for catching up with my story and commenting every single one of the chapters. 
          
          I'm beyond grateful for your feedback. It really, really means a lot and believe it or not, it helps me improve my writing! (Lost in translation me has already taken down notes on the paragraph thingy! Haha)
          
          And as I said in one of the comments: Chapter 5 will be dedicated to you. :)
          
          Thank you.
          
          Again.
          
          Ha. 
          
          .xx

temporary-g-o-l-d

Of course! I felt that every chapter should have had at least 10 but I thought that would've been a little too excessive hahah. 
            
            definitely!! i love reading other people's work because i learn TONS of stuff from them, and yours also helps me become a better writer because yours is like a great model to look up to <3 
            
            OMG, that is so amazing...i'm going to dedicate my chapter six to you just because you're an awesome person and an AMAZING WRITER AAAH IDK IF I COULD SAY THAT ENOUGH! and because you are just a legitimately humble and nice person :')
            
            no, THANK YOU!
            I hope you have a wonderful day c:
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blissfullytortured

Hey babe, I started 'The things I've done for you' and I'm loving it so far - added it to one of my reading lists to catch up with it asap! :) 
          
          It'd mean the world if you could check my story 'Beautifully Flawed' - I've just started it and I haven't had much proper feedback on it (if that's okay with you,of course!) .xx

temporary-g-o-l-d

aw thank you so much!! that means a ton <3 and i would defintely LOVE to read it!! we really do need to help each other out, thank you for commenting you're awesome.
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