Pramod Limbu

@momlove1234 Hello! Brittney, thanks for your concern. Acutually I am from Nepal and here we celebrate Mother's Day in a different day. Thank you anyway and I wish your Mother's Day was wonderful. Ya, we should talk more often and get to know each other. By the way, my name is Pramod Limbu and like I said I am from Nepal and a follower Jesus Christ. I will be reading your story and I have seen that you have good imagination which is what makes a good story. And I believe in your dream that one day you will be a successful writer. If you don't mind I would like to know more about yourself.

@momlove1234 Thanks again for fixing the chapter and I've read it and found it to be good. For the next chapter I think you can bring the villians for little thrill. May be there will be some fight and every thing seems to be against Charlie so that you can end the chapter with suspense leaving the readers with curiosity regarding what might happen next. At least that's my idea and you should always bring your own imagination and creativity because it's your story.

@momlove1234 I am very glad you chose to remove inapproriate parts of the story and replaced with good one. Ya you should continue making the story for kids and family and I liked that part where Annie gets adopted by Charlie and Sasha. You have good imagination and I like the way you write about details. I can see that your writing skill is improving. I want to encourage you to focus on your spellings, full stops, grammer...you know so that people will be willing to read more. Anyway you are doing good.  

@momlove1234 thank you so much and you're right I should not let others get to me no matter what and what matters is I'm doing this for fun and you are right it is a bad idea to post a story book to a store besides people will not want to read it anyway so it's best to stick to what I got right now and focus on my writing and practice a little more and like you said in the future it will become even better and who knows maybe one day they will make all dogs Go To Heaven free or fourth movie in the future you'll never know right and thank you for the encouragement I really appreciate it and You and Your Friends Are free to post new ideas for the story I really appreciate it ❤️

@momlove1234 Well, don't be discouraged. You know you have problem with spellings and grammer. But like any other skills you can learn to be better at your writing skills. You can use dictionary apps, online tutorials and make habit of reading more and more stories so that your writing skill will be improved. It might take some months or even some years but you will get better at it every day. Right now, I don't think it's good idea to put it in a store but if you want to then you can do that. However, remember that you can be a good writer, even the best one. Keep going. Don't give up. Follow your dreams. I believe in you.☺☺☺

@momlove1234 @momlove1234 when I'm done with the story and playing 2 put it in a store but no one will probably not buy it besides who would be interested in buying the story I'm not the best writer anyway who well buy my book in a store if I'm not the best writer do you know ️❤️