@ICryOverGayFanfics And whenever you make a character speak, be sure to use correct punctuation. Examples being; "Oh alright. I guess we could do that," Character said/whispered. When you mention a characters name right after they speak, and you use the word said(etc.) Then using a coma is the proper punc. However, if you add action right after a spoken sentence, like this; "Oh, alright. I guess we could do that." Character smiled as he said this/Character smiled as he got up. - This would be the best use for periods. Idk if this helps much but hopefully it does! :)
