thaliaelie

Hey Travellers! Ready for some treasure hunting fun? Zoe's curly girl adventure is set to start! Hair We GO! https://www.wattpad.com/story/210399198

AJF2468

@thaliaelie How can I purchase your book?
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JackPagliante

thanks for voting and reading my story The Arkanist! really appreciate it, and so glad you like it :)

thaliaelie

@JackPagliante  your welcome.  just one.but of  feedback.. the descriptions are so long and the parts that say: this rock moved like such and such happens so much..I just skip pages since they are so long...the moon dripped like...etc. i actually jusy deleted the book even though im totally wondering about the characters cause its sooo mega description based slow. sorry. i hope it helps and it your editing goes Well..Happy writing
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