StarlaBoo

Hey....I love your work....but sorry I can't make comments it's my stupid phone....but maybe they walk into school together holding hands and everyone bis staring at them. Fionna is confused on this So She Asks Marshall.Make up an idea on why this is happening. ...Bubba apologies for what he did and asks her out on a date or if they can just start over....but Marshall intrudes them and blah...blah. Marshall takes them out on a real date. But Bubba and some random person (Ashley) could be watching them on their date.....then they talk about how the plan is on its way...And BOOM end of chapter. ...you don't have to use its your story after all

that_awesome_chick22

@StarlaBoo  That's a really good idea, i'll fit it in the next chapter, thanks so much
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WilburLover

I have and idea or ur book.(btw the reason why I didn't put it in the comments is cuz my iPhone 4s won't let me but anyway) you should have marshy fall in love with fi but he won't confess it every time they touch they blush cake finds out he's a vamp and flips but she realizes that fi really likes him

that_awesome_chick22

@MarshallLeeLover123 Ok, thanks so much for the idea. I'll try to update today or tomorrow. I'll be sure to add it into the story.
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