that_weird_1

sorry i got a little excited:(

huh that sounds really fucking cool!!! I am going to do that for the next chapter!! And believe me it will make the awesomness triple! Thanks @that_weird_1

o could picture them really well. Just a thought...but you have 4 other senses at ur disposal...d you did sight perfectly but, it helps some people if you have smell, touch, sound, and taste also.

you like the intertwining plots? :) what did you think of the aliens. I really want to know if I did a good job with the discriptions

@thehorrorwriter

ummm...im not sure what you are asking? but I love how all the different point of views tie together and have connections.

what are the aspects of my chapter life and death do u like the most?