Deep4141

Hi, how’s it going?  
          I uploaded Chapters 4 and 5 of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" . I would very much like it if u could read them and comment on it. Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and become a fan. ;-) :)) I will return the favor for your works. Thanks in advance !!!   ;-)  ;-)  Here's the link to my story- 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/500304-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right  
          http://www.wattpad.com/500318-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right 
          

xiaomage94

HI...i hope that you could read my story on..." A story of twisted fate(an immortal story)the past, present and future. When dreams turn to be real" and a poem on “love and hate” and "silent love" read other poems if u have the time.
          please comment, fan and vote....your comment means a lot to me....thanks.
          PLS READ THE POEM ON” SILENT LOVE”…comment
          I had just posted new poems on ’because of you’ and ’don’t leave me’ check it out and comment..thanks