@MidnightKittenCat Hey I just finished reading it! :) I like your different take on the werewolf style by giving the person and 'beast' different names. So far I'm intrigued! Of course there's some minor grammar errors and stuff but everyone's first chapters have that haha. What I find works for me is reading the chapter again the day after I write it. It kind of helps you look at things with a clear mind and makes it easier to see mistakes. Anyways, I love the story so far! :)