AuthorGrowthByEliza
Hi, i just started your story, and that moment with the two pink lines… it felt heavy in a very real way. Like everything changed in a second, and you can already feel the weight of it on Natalie.
It made me pause for a bit. I’m really curious to see how you carry that emotion through the story, I feel like this one is going to stay with me
AuthorGrowthByEliza
I definitely will, there’s already something about Natalie that feels really real and easy to connect with.
And now I’m curious about “I” too… I feel like there’s a lot more depth there than we’ve seen yet, I’m looking forward to how their story unfolds