Thanks so much for following me! I have been reading your book the spell of the mysterious boy and it is SO good! PLease add more as soon as possible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's one of my absoulute favorite books on wattpad! Some suggestions I have is just devolop the characters as fully as possible, think of them as real people, what are their hobbies, their favorite things, their hopes and dreams, their biggest fears? Your doing a great job so! I would also further devop the protaginists reason she went to stay with her aunt in the first reason, and just don't rush into the very beginning and meeting zale so much! But other then that it's absouloutly perfect! I would just develop the main charecters relationship with zale as much as possible! Thank you so much for writing this book!
