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Made an update/edit to Chapters 1 and 2. Added a new scene in chapter 1 and changed the chapter break between 1 and 2 in addition to some edits for grammar & flow (unlike Pokemon, you never catch em all).
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I’m almost done with chapter 13. This one’s been difficult to write due the logistics in it, but it should be ready this week.
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Thinking about removing the prologue from American Star. I’m not sure it’s drawing people into the story like I’d like. It survived the the complete tear down and rewrite of the beginning of the book and has a different style and tone, but maybe I’m overthinking.
Anyway, thank you to everyone who is reading.
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@PrimeofPrimes115 Honestly I haven't decided yet. I go back and forth on it. It needs to be re-edited regardless.
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@the-moocat Ah really? If you're gonna re-write the prologue then that's fine! Happens to the best of us! Didn't see your story till yesterday after coming across OC's from your DeviantArt profile posts! And you're welcome :)