Jay~X♓️

Hi there my name is Xavier and I am a novice writer. I would like for you to check out my first book Island Boy. I'm for feedback. 

Wtf happen to Romero and Julius

Why does every story start off with " His my name is... And this is my story " ☹️
          In school we were taught that was the wrong way to start off writing. Is there any good bxb story where the prologue doesn't make the speaker sound they are in elementary??