the761_aarmaufan

Chapter 22 is ready! I took a while on the edits but that's because I enjoy this one so much. Hope you do too <3

the761_aarmaufan

Okay. So it happened again and I just realized. I've now changed the method of telling me and so it should never happen like this again. (Praying anyway)
          
          I will publish this chapter tomorrow. Thank you all for your endless patience with my tomfoolery.

the761_aarmaufan

Hey! I don't know why, but my phone's calendar keeps deleting my reminder to post chapters. Of which I didn't know until now.
          
          So I have (potentially) fixed the problem and the chapter will be out soon like promised.
          
          But yeah that's why it didn't go up.

the761_aarmaufan

The changes to the language are complete! I don't know if this helps at all, and really you weren't missing too much in my opinion, but I hope you guys find this method better.
          
          Also please remember that everything in bold can only be understood by Jace and Y/N. (Names of artifacts and the language will remain how they are cause they're names.)

the761_aarmaufan

So... I've done some thinking... (which you all know is dangerous, but I think you'll disagree this time.)
          
          I've been speaking to my family member, who reads this as my sort of beta reader, and they agree that the language takes them out of the story experience.
          
          So, instead of how I have it currently, I'm going to have it as normal English that is still bolded so you know when it is the language. UNLESS! it is in one of the special chapters from someone else's POV because they wouldn't know what is being said.
          
          Does this sound like a good idea? I don't think there is much in the language that you are /really/ missing out on, but I've gotten a couple of comments and PMs (on both websites) and I just don't want it to ruin people's reading. :/

the761_aarmaufan

It should be noted that the language is largely curse words as I have siblings talking to each other and I definitely don't talk to my sibling without curse words. Though this is subject to change as I plan on adding a few others into the language (various reasons and you'll see as we get there.)
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the761_aarmaufan

Preparing for upcoming events by doing a bunch of lore reading on the wiki. Basically, I need the names of characters and places in order to feel confident in what I am writing.
          
          I'm learning a lot about MCD season 3 and Mystreet that I did not know before. It's interesting and I think I'll take some of the ideas behind those events to add to the story I'm trying to tell.
          
          It won't be that similar due to the fact that I think a lot of the events during those points make the storyline more confusing / don't line up with the story I'm telling. But I will definitely be taking some of the basic information/ideas and running with those.
          
          TLDR: How do we feel about Aphmau not being the only one to recover some memories?

JamieNB2010

I’m really excited for it I will try to think of character and places to help you
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