theApocalypse369

I usually write LGBTQ+/BL stories, but this story is a departure from my usual themes. It is a work of fiction that explores time travel, different realms, and other elements.(A girl who killed her past-self)
          	
          	I am thankful to all the lovely writers and readers who have helped me improve my work so far. For this piece as well, I would truly appreciate reviews and feedback from all of you.

theApocalypse369

@theApocalypse369 please, not just the grammar ,if something else is there that needs a change ...please do tell,I would be grateful..
          	  Thank you..❤
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januaryL_8

It’s such a different writing style! I was super impressed when I took a look. Would you like me to add comments pointing out grammatical errors?
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theApocalypse369

I usually write LGBTQ+/BL stories, but this story is a departure from my usual themes. It is a work of fiction that explores time travel, different realms, and other elements.(A girl who killed her past-self)
          
          I am thankful to all the lovely writers and readers who have helped me improve my work so far. For this piece as well, I would truly appreciate reviews and feedback from all of you.

theApocalypse369

@theApocalypse369 please, not just the grammar ,if something else is there that needs a change ...please do tell,I would be grateful..
            Thank you..❤
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januaryL_8

It’s such a different writing style! I was super impressed when I took a look. Would you like me to add comments pointing out grammatical errors?
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januaryL_8

Back to say I love your comments again <3

januaryL_8

@theApocalypse369 yes of course, you’re doing great!! :D
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theApocalypse369

@januaryL_8 My pleasure...❤ English is not my first lang. and I not very good with eng. slangs so sometimes I'm little nervous and afraid maybe,they're not comprehend the way I meant...Ur message really put me at ease...
            Thank you...❤
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januaryL_8

More comments from you this morning… thank you thank you <3 <3 making my day again hehe

theApocalypse369

@januaryL_8 ^⁠_⁠^(⁠^⁠^⁠)
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januaryL_8

@theApocalypse369 Woww thank you so much!!! Awww :D
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theApocalypse369

@januaryL_8 You really don't need to thank me.. Your work is amazing!!
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theApocalypse369

Hey friends! Hope you all are doing great  I just wanted to share that A Shine Through the Winter will be going on hiatus for a while. Sometimes a little pause is needed to come back with more energy and fresh ideas, and that’s what this break is about.
          
           Thank you for being with me always—it truly keeps me going.

CloverCottonwood12

Hi! I'm Clover, and I have something to say. I'm making my first book that I'm not co-writing, and it would be neat if you could maybe check it out? It's has anthropomorphic animals and I spend a lot of time working and editing it. When I finish it, I'll give it to my friend so she can properly edit it herself, and also so it can be scholastic approved. 
          I hope you guys enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it. Anyway yeah here you go:
          
          21 year old Max didn't know what to say when he was chosen to be the prince's spouse, judging by how the bakery he owned made little to no money. But the day he was chosen, everything changed. As they finally start to get used to each other, Prince Leo notices that things are changing beyond their kingdom, and Max must compete in a championship purely for one's entertainment. Through broken bones and pure determination, he finally gets to prove he's worthy enough for the prince.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/397873712-animality-volume-1-prince-%C3%97-baker

theApocalypse369

@CloverCottonwood12 (⁠人⁠⁠•͈⁠ᴗ⁠•͈⁠)(⁠◍⁠•⁠ᴗ⁠•⁠◍⁠)
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CloverCottonwood12

As thank you SO MUCH!!! I really appreciate it.
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theApocalypse369

@CloverCottonwood12 No, not at all. It’s actually good to hear that you have such a helpful friend and that you’re feeling better. (⁠◕⁠ᴗ⁠◕⁠✿⁠)
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theApocalypse369

Sorry for the delay..(⁠◡⁠⁠ω⁠⁠◡⁠)
          
          I had network issues..
          
          But the chapter is damm.. interesting.. I can surely say that
          
          You will know more about Aki-chan, Shuto-kun, Ito-kun and classmates... New characters (Ren-kun)
          Please, don't forget to like.. if u did..& share ur views..
          Thank you...