theReaderInMe

Here's the sneak peek of my Teen Humor story!!! >>>>>>
          	
          	"Do you have a sister?" he asks. Damn. And here I was hoping my nerd disguise would work.
          	
          	 "Yeah, why?" I ask.
          	
          	"Does she go here?" he asks. 
          	
          	"No, she's in college," I say. Where is he going with this?
          	
          	"I think I met her at a dance club last Saturday," he says. I curse under my breath. I wish he would just leave and forget that he saw me there.
          	
          	 "So?" I ask, waiting for it to come.
          	
          	"Do you have another sister? Because there was this girl I met and she looks similar to you, and you're wearing her shoes so I just figured..." he trails off. I admittedly panic. Suddenly, an idea forms. He thinks it's my sister, so why not go with it?
          	
          	"Oh! You meant my other sister!" I exclaim quickly.
          	
          	"You have two sisters?" he asks. I mentally curse at myself, knowing I suck at lying.
          	
          	"Yeah, one is older and the other is my twin," I lie, with a fake smile.
          	
          	"Your twin? Does she go here?"
          	
          	"No!" I almost yell. "She goes to a different high school."
          	
          	"Well, do you think you could give me her number?" he asks.
          	
          	I quickly say "No" before he can grab his phone out.
          	
          	"Why not?" he asks, looking confused and... well I would say disappointed. 
          	
          	"She told me you pissed her off," I say narrowing my eyes at him, knowing he definitely pissed her off. "And wouldn't leave her alone when she told you to."
          	
          	"I mean, yeah. I really like her," he says. Yeah, you like her because she's the one thing you can't get, I think to myself.
          	
          	"I'm not giving you her number," I say, walking past him.
          	
          	"What? Why not?" he asks from behind.
          	
          	"It's not my number to give," I lie, knowing it is my number.
          	
          	"At least tell her David says hi!" he yells. She heard you, I think to myself as I wave without looking back. A small smile grows as I realize... This could be fun.

theReaderInMe

Here's the sneak peek of my Teen Humor story!!! >>>>>>
          
          "Do you have a sister?" he asks. Damn. And here I was hoping my nerd disguise would work.
          
           "Yeah, why?" I ask.
          
          "Does she go here?" he asks. 
          
          "No, she's in college," I say. Where is he going with this?
          
          "I think I met her at a dance club last Saturday," he says. I curse under my breath. I wish he would just leave and forget that he saw me there.
          
           "So?" I ask, waiting for it to come.
          
          "Do you have another sister? Because there was this girl I met and she looks similar to you, and you're wearing her shoes so I just figured..." he trails off. I admittedly panic. Suddenly, an idea forms. He thinks it's my sister, so why not go with it?
          
          "Oh! You meant my other sister!" I exclaim quickly.
          
          "You have two sisters?" he asks. I mentally curse at myself, knowing I suck at lying.
          
          "Yeah, one is older and the other is my twin," I lie, with a fake smile.
          
          "Your twin? Does she go here?"
          
          "No!" I almost yell. "She goes to a different high school."
          
          "Well, do you think you could give me her number?" he asks.
          
          I quickly say "No" before he can grab his phone out.
          
          "Why not?" he asks, looking confused and... well I would say disappointed. 
          
          "She told me you pissed her off," I say narrowing my eyes at him, knowing he definitely pissed her off. "And wouldn't leave her alone when she told you to."
          
          "I mean, yeah. I really like her," he says. Yeah, you like her because she's the one thing you can't get, I think to myself.
          
          "I'm not giving you her number," I say, walking past him.
          
          "What? Why not?" he asks from behind.
          
          "It's not my number to give," I lie, knowing it is my number.
          
          "At least tell her David says hi!" he yells. She heard you, I think to myself as I wave without looking back. A small smile grows as I realize... This could be fun.

theReaderInMe

Hey guys! I've started a new story called Nobody's a Nobody. I'm really excited about it because I'm trying to expand my writing abilities to different Genres, so I would appreciate ANY feedback I can get. Check it out and get back to me! Thanks <3

theReaderInMe

@DrEvil1149 Ahhhh!!!  I'm so happy and ecstatic that you love it!!!!  XP Thank you so much gurl!! You da bomb! 
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DrEvil1149

@theReaderInMe  I love it! It's such a creative and amazing idea. I didn't notice anything, then again I wasn't really looking for them, but i'll go through it again and point them out if I see any. ;)
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theReaderInMe

@DrEvil1149  yayyyy!!! I hop you like it!!! XD and you're still my editor so tell me if there's something wrong or awkward XP
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theReaderInMe

@DrEvil1149 you know you're amazing, right? Well you should <3

DrEvil1149

@theReaderInMe I miss you too :'(
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DrEvil1149

@theReaderInMe Awww. You're awesome. :) <3
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theReaderInMe

Heyy guys so I accidentally clicked "Save and Publish" on a story called Book Title (2). The reason it's called that is because i haven't come up with a title as it is not ready. You can read it if you want, but I don't think it will be ready for awhile now. Sorry about that!