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@Danor78 Sorry, I haven't been online for a while! I'll definetely keep reading! :)

@ the_dungeon_master  thanks

@CapainMarvel Ich habe keine Statistik zu Europäern gefunden (nur, dass sich der Verkauf dort in den letzten Jahren um ca. 300% gesteigert hat), aber in Nordamerika spielten 2017 schätzungsweise 12 bis 15 Millionen der 362 Millionen Einwohner DnD, was etwa 3,3% bis 4,1% der Bevölkerung sind. Ich würde die Spielerzahl in Europa allgemein daher auf 1% bis maximal 2% schätzen, aber das ist nur ein Bauchgefühl. Richtige Zahlen konnte ich bisher nicht dazu finden... auch ist die Zahl der Spielenden wahrscheinlich in Großbritannien höher als in den Ländern auf dem "Festland".

@ CapainMarvel  ok danke☺

@Danor78 Thanks a lot for your feedback! I totally agree with you. Both chapters got longer than I expected and I'll shorten them very much before I continue with other chapters. It is supposed to be for brand new beginners indeed. 
            The idea with the appendix is really good, actually! I think that's exactly what I am going to to!

@Danor78 I was actually planning on reading a little more tomorrow. :D

@Danor78 I finished the first chapter! There'll be a comment in just a second.

@Danor78 Sorry! Not yet but I will be by this weekend!

@the_dungeon_master Yep that's me!

@huffleRoses Oh, I was never religious in the first place (if that's what you mean?) but I definetely agree that one shouldn't have to give up their religion entirely just because someone else of that religion has or had an... unique way of interpreting it. 
            I really love the game too! You're writing "The Unfortunates", aren't you?

@the_dungeon_master The Satanic Panic was actually started by a televangelist a few decades ago, telling that rock and roll music, role playing games and other things were of Satanic origin. What people of that day (and others even now) don't seem to realize is that if you keep you mind focused on what is truly important, then God will bless you. His main concern is not weather or not you play dnd, but stay away of the things of Satan (which dnd is not). You do not have to put away your belief system, rather stay aware of traps. 
            Also dnd is FANTASTIC! I've actually almost completed a story based off dnd!

@Danor78 I guess that makes a lot of sense! I'd surely overshare too if someone had lost their memory.
            
            I can definitely try and find grammar mistakes but English is only my second language so usually when sentences sound funny to me it's because of me and not the text. xD
            What helps me the most with finding grammar mistakes in my writings is putting them aside for at least a month or two. After that I usually forgot how I phrased things etc. so I'll read more carefully.
            
            You're welcome! Though I should be probably be thanking you for sharing your story! :)
            

I guess it was info dumping. I over share in real life to. So maybe it came from that too. But I wanted the reader to understand what is going on around the setting. Plus I kinda figured since Markus had no memory of who he is, where he came from. Much less where he is at. That George would just be informing him about the place around him.
            
            Plz read over the grammatical errors. I’ve read it over and over. Had my wife and son read it. And even had my app read it to me. I catch a lot more errors that way. So plz don’t judge it on that.
            
            I am really excited that you are reading and enjoying it. 
            
            Trust me, I totally understand how real life gets in the way of pleasures and what not. I have a full time job and family. So I get it.
            
            When ever you do get to it is fine with me. 
            
            Thank you so much again for reading!

@Danor78 I've started reading the first chapter and I really like the dnd-vibes (I mean, it's taking place in Wildemount so it's obviously dnd but I generally like reading about it :)). The only thing that confused me a little was George infodumping Markus about his village. That felt a bit unnatural. I think my favourite part was when Markus tried to feel his ears as if he was checking wether they were stillt there. It's just a small sententence but could picture it so well it made me laugh! 
            I'll try and read more of it as soon as I can but I'm a little busy at the moment so it might take me a while. 
            Keep it up! :)

@Teesatz 
            Oh ja, Reddit wollte ich mir auch mal näher ansehen. ^^

@glitchman211 xD
            That's promising! I'll give them a try then. Thank you very much! :)

@the_dungeon_master ive mixed the two editions into a new thing i called edition 4.514159