the_lucid
Hello everyone
Quick update!
I will be focusing these coming 2-3 weeks on refining my older chapters based on the feedback I have received.
Let me know if there's something specific in my writing that you believe warrants attention and improvement.
I'll continue my reading lists after I'm finished with the reworking :)
P.s Thankuu so much to my reading community for all your inputs. You guys are the best❤️
the_lucid
@CodingQueen007 Fire them away. I have only rewritten the first chapter, and I'll let you know when the others are ready. Loved your comments, and I have addressed them. Let me know if the rationale makes sense to you, and if not, what you would recommend. P.s. the story is not linear, so there will be a lot of holes/missing info that will be filled later so if there seems to be a gap in narrative it's likely intentional :) Thankuuu so so much for the detailed feedback❤️
CodingQueen007
@the_lucid I added a few comments — I hope they come across the right way. I really don’t want to hurt your feelings, so let me know if you'd prefer I hold off on giving more.
