@CodingQueen007 Fire them away. I have only rewritten the first chapter, and I'll let you know when the others are ready. Loved your comments, and I have addressed them. Let me know if the rationale makes sense to you, and if not, what you would recommend.
P.s. the story is not linear, so there will be a lot of holes/missing info that will be filled later so if there seems to be a gap in narrative it's likely intentional :)
Thankuuu so so much for the detailed feedback❤️