WhiteCorvus
Hi, my name is WhiteCorvus! I just wanted to say that I truly enjoyed your poetry book and hope you continue. While the book wasn't perfect, no ones is, but what was said was perfect enough to affect me :) I hope you have a nice day and I wish you inspiration for your next poem. If you ever need more inspiration you can go to a profile called @PoetsPub there they have contest, poetry collections and other poets :)
WhiteCorvus
@the_starless_galaxy Ay Pobrecita, es muy malo! It's like all people do is follow then forget you. I try to message my followers just to say I am there and show them interesting stuff or whatever I am doing. This reminds me...... As for the other thing you said. I exactly agree!
the_starless_galaxy
@WhiteCorvus You're very right, I tend to think no matter how butchered a poem is, even in it's rawest form it is still a work of art, taking a feeling and expressing it in word form for others to understand and feel the same way just by reading it is a beautiful thing. I hope to better myself and I really love getting advice, no matter how negative. Also thank you for messaging me, it's been a long time since someone has messaged or commented to me^-^
WhiteCorvus
@the_starless_galaxy I really haven't been that helpful. But I do warm my cold hard facts up a lot and set them on my flowery cushioned chairs from IKEA, lol :) I try not be that brutal with my first set of critiques, but with my second I do bring up bigger issues. My thing is to always be nice. I am trying to help someone not break them :) My being very open to new things and seeing greatness in anything helps. I can truthfully say I have found no poetry that was just not salvageable.
