@pacifykari well, for that feedback idea:
1. I love this idea. I've seen so many stories that are like the first words they say to you are on your wrist, so i think this is super creative
2. I love your humor! A good story has good humor, but also a good story and writing style
3. Just keep going, because there are probably lots of people who want to write a fanfic, but don't have the courage to post it. So good job for being able to post something!